My Short Story!

Hi, Im Nikyla and me and my class are doing this thing called Quick Write. For Quick Wright the Teacher gave us 20 Minutes to write a short story. This is my story, HOPE YOU ENJOY! Once upon a time there were two identical twins both age 16 their names were Milly and Molly. They were on a boat cruise. After 8 hours sailing around they both knew they had got lost. Molly and Milly went to bed, in the morning Molly went outside of their room and looked outside the window and yelled Lad AHEAD. Milly woke up and ran to the window. “Yay land” Milly said. Milly and Molly went and got dressed and stepped off the boat and ran up to an apple tree and picked some apples to eat. After all that they went and looked around. After looking around for a bit they saw this very big castle! “ A ruined castle,” Molly said. They ran right to the castle and went in. They heard a weird noise. “What is that sound? “ Milly said, so they went up to the top of the castle and saw an old man playing bagpipes. They hid from him as he played. “It sounds very sad,” Molly said, so Milly and Molly went up to him. “ Hi “ Milly and Molly said. The man said hello to them and they had a big chat about the man and the castle! After that Milly and Molly said they had to go home now, so the man said goodbye to them and as they were going down the castle they heard the man crying so they both ran back up and said to the man “Do you want to come back home with us? “ The man said , “Yes please” . The girls smiled, “come on” said Milly, “THANK YOU SO MUCH” the man said. As they got into the boat Milly said “ what's your name? “ “ Brendon “ said the man! “ nice name” said Molly “ thank you” said Brendon. As they got home Brendon went and stayed in a nice hotel and Molly and Milly went back home to their mum and dad! By Nikyla!